In the crystal
icicles
Melting drop by drop
From tips of frozen
stems,
I feel His warmth
there.
In the azure blue
canvas
Turned to crimson,
gold and purple
By the setting sun,
I see Him painting
there.
In the clay that
holds the seed
And then clings to
the root
Of the new plant
sprouting leaves,
I see Him giving
life.
In the plaintive
cries
Of a new born calf
Calling out to it’s
mother,
I hear His answering
call.
In the birds building
nests
Using just their
beaks
To weave a marvel
from grass,
I see His helping
hand.
In the snail on the
sidewalk
Curling into it’s
shell
At the sound of
footsteps nearby,
I see His protective
hand.
In the tightly closed
bud
That opens petal by
petal
Spreading fragrance
all around,
I inhale His presence
nearby.
In the glow of the
fireflies
Which fly by at night
Winking brightly at
me,
I see Him giving
light.
In the spreading
wings
Of the birds soaring
In the open skies,
I see Him giving
flight.
In the silver fish
Which swim the depths
Of the deep blue sea,
I see Him giving air.
In the upturned
beetle
That struggles to get
onto
It’s feet once again,
I see His gentle
push.
In the ray of light
That peeps through
A crack in the dark
clouds,
I see Him shining
there.
In the first steps of
a little baby girl
As she totters
towards
Her mother’s
outstretched arms,
I see His steadying
hand.
In the giving hands
Of kind folk who
reach out
To outstretched
palms,
I see Him smiling
there.
In this beautiful
world
I look, hear, feel
All around me…..everywhere,
And I see Him there.
It's a masterpiece. Your best yet. I am glad you didn't try to rhyme this poem. It gave you more freedom to express yourself and choose the right words. The poem has a positive tone throughout and will lift the spirit of the reader, and I think that's a great achievement in itself. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Pholgu. As always I love your comment and your insight. You are absolutely right dear..not rhyming it gave me more freedom. I need to try more like this. And I am also tempted ( by your poem on Ratha Yatra) to try out a refrain too. 😊
DeleteThis is so beautifully written. Manifestation of a life well lived and a beautiful mind! Keep going Rebbeca. Loved this kne!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Anjali. That is such a lovely thing to say.
DeleteIndeed we need that inner eye to see Him....for he is everywhere...
ReplyDeleteBecky...absolutely wonderful...
We all see Him Shalu. We know it in our hearts. I just put it down in words. Thankyou dear. 😊
ReplyDeleteYour writing signifies that you never lose an opportunity of seeing anything beautiful, for beauty is God's handwriting.
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