Lost in the depths of the Earth
With darkness all around
And no hope in sight,
The little brown seed sighed
And recalled it’s days in the light.
It remembered in the deep recesses
Of it’s little brown heart,
The sweet heady scent of over ripe fruit
As they cracked apart.
A tiny black beak chirping and pecking
And then Splat!
Falling down into the dry grass
Among scores of busy ants
Hurrying and scurrying.
From whence it looked up at the painted scene
The pastel blue with the wispy clouds,
‘tween the green of the leaves
And the birds chirping aloud.
The bees buzzing around
In the hot summer noon,
Among fruit burst open
And seeds everywhere strewn.
And then being lifted
By dozens of minions,
Down a deep dark hole
To the nether regions.
All this and more
It remembered fondly,
As it lay in the dark
And mused dreamily.
And then, an overcast sky,
The distant rumble of thunder,
The first drops hit the thirsty soil
And reached the seed hidden under.
The fragrance of damp earth,
It squirmed in delight,
And the little brown seed began
It’s tryst with sunlight.
Warmed and loved
With that gentle caress,
It swelled up with pride
And burst forth in tenderness.
Soft green feelers
From within it’s sheath,
One to feel the sky
The other, deep beneath.
Which danced in the sunlight
Sprouting freshness in green,
Delighted to be where
The little seed had once been.

Becky, just brilliant!
ReplyDeleteSimply lovely....you a true nature lover....
ReplyDeleteThere is lot said in your poems...each line linked to life...
ReplyDelete'Tryst with sunlight.' That is such a powerful visualisation! This is beautiful, Becky. I agree with Shalu - your poetry is deeply linked to life and brings forth the power of Life. This is true even of the other poem of yours about the fisherman coming back to an empty home.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tikli. I need this kind of feedback to motivate me and also critical appreciation....so that I can improve and keep writing. I look forward to seeing your comments here.
ReplyDeleteStraight from ur heart wonderful words full of expression
ReplyDeleteThank you Aaparna.
ReplyDeleteThe poems keep getting better and better! I'm so proud of being your student! As pointed out by someone already, 'tryst with sunlight' was a stroke of brilliance. I love how the life of the seed can be compared to the highs and lows of human life as well. Absolutely in love with this poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Pholgu.
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ReplyDeleteYou are surely a seed of greatness and illustriousness that God has planted in this world.
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